Rosa's five fan-fiction links

 "Three Little Pigs"

This is the amazing fan fiction from the old time, its about 3 clever little pigs who lived with their mother in the same house. However, one day the mother decided to send them away to build their own house, so they can protect themselves from the bad wolf. On their way one of them met a man with load of hay then one of the little big asked the man for some hay so he can build his house. The second pig met a man on his way carried a load of wood, then he asked the man for some woods so he can build his house. But the third pig is still looking for something that he know its more secure and safe to protect him from the wolf, then he met a man carry bricks, then the little pig asked the man for some bricks so he can build his house.

 The story flow really well. It tells the main characters who play different role in the story. It tells the main reason why the 3 little pigs left their mother. The author is connecting the audience (children) really well by telling this story.The colour of characters is very attractive and this can give a good feeling for young reader to enjoying the story.





"Avatar"


Based to the main core of the story of Avatar, which human who transform to Navi-human to entered the land of Pandora. Apparently if human do not transform to an avatar then they will not able to live in the land, because the atmosphere is poisonous. Scientist from the earth notice that Pandora have some kind of the expensive minerals, so they need to explore the whole land for it. However, the leader of the army orders Jake and Grace to evacuate the land, but they fail it. Then he orders again to destroy the Hometree which is the main important part of Pandora.


The story is really attractive present and also flow really well. It introduces all characters in the story. All different characters pointed out their own role in the story. However, the author mention the name of the land but I still confuse where is the land based on. If the land based on the other side of the earth or not? Or maybe it's good idea  if they can identified the name of the planet, this can give some good knowledge to those who read it or watch the Avatars movie. The dialogue in between characters have very authentic and also the idea of the movie  has the same view of the or the written story.

"Twilight"

Based on Belle point of view, she is just a normal girl moves from Phoenix Arizona to Washington. Belle stay with her father while her mother is doing some travel with her new husband which is a minor basketball player. Belle enrolls and join the new school, but something about Bell she is a really shy girl. Apparently, she sad right next to a guy named Edward and he is vampire. This young girl fell in love with the vampire (Edward), another guy join the group and his name was Jacob. Obvioursly Bell almost hit by a car in the carpark of the school, however Edward came from nowhere and saved her from blocking the car by his own hands. Edward protected Belle from vampires of the field.


All sentences flow really well. All characters introduced from the beginning and their role in the story. The author utilised her knowledge to make the story perfectly, so the readers can understand what the story its all about. The dialogue between characters is very authentic and has the same  with the oringinal movie. The fanfiction  of Twilight its very interesting and really fun to read.

"Tinkerbell the fairy"

The fanfiction its all about the fairy who born of a baby first laugh. Tinkerbell is a small little fairy and she really want to go to the land of fairies called Pixie Hollow. However, she don't have a proper talent, but most of fairies in the land have their own talents to help building the land of Pixie. Tinkerbell is really facinated to be in the land, so she got help from her friends. Tinkerbell tried really hard to learn different talent from her friend, however, she really can't because she is just a tinker and her talent is tinkering, this mean that she can fix anything to help the land. She found a broken music box in the bush and she tried to put them together. Apparently, she worked  fixing the music box, her friends watched her. So they witness that Tinkerbell has her own talent.

The story is really good and very interesting to read. It start from the indroduction, although it a bit comfusing because its really hard to follow, but the whole body of the story delivered the main factor of the story. the dialogue its very well done and all characters are very well presented. 

"Spongebob Squrepant"

The facfiction its about the animate yellow sea sponge living in the pineapple house under the bottom sea. He actually have a pet called Gary the snail. Spongebob have a good mate who alway hang around with him together and his name is Patrick. Spongebob basically he is a kitchen sponge and he works in the restaurant and his main duty in the restaurant is cooking patties for burgers. He also a trouble maker under the ocean, but he love his pet Gary, his friends and his work in the Crusty Krab restaurant.


I love the way the author write about the story of spongebob under the botton sea. However, its really hard to follow some part of the story because characters are all mixed up. Because sometimes spongebob worked behind the kitchen but some other time he all over the place and its really hard to guess what is the main role of this character (Spongebob) in the story. Although the story itself are all mix up from the beginning, but I'm still enjoying the fact of the story. It means, Spongebob is the character who make batties. Look at the actual fact in the real life, the sponge can do all the work behind the kitchen.